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Cursed city pt.1

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[[The cursed city.]] :D

First and foremost I would like to thank God for giving me the ability to be creative.

Credits are in the Film and I hope you enjoy.

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Dragonflae's avatar
Wow, Kenny. That was pretty good for a beginner :p

However, you need to use a lot more slang for these guys. People--especially criminals---usually don't speak so clearly. Also, you tried unsuccessfully to combine novel and script formats...pick one or the other and stick with it, you can't have both and expect to tell an understandable story.
I'm really sorry I havn't gotten around to editing what you sent me :/ Between Civics and Biology, I havn't had the time to do squat.

Keep working on this, though. The art was cool, and it has potential.